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you don't know
that i
love you

you don't know yet
but you will

you don't know that
when we first met
i was frightened
not because
of our differences
but because
of
my
heart
leaping directly
into your hands

you had a hold on me
the first day
i knew you

and like my plants
it grew
and your vines
your influence
grew
within me
and wrapped my heart
and threatened to break it

if

i ever

lost

those

vines

my heart would never
be able
to be supported
it would

fall

like i had fallen for you

you don't know
that i
love you

you don't know yet
but you will

or maybe
you already knew i was
afraid
but you interpreted it wrong
maybe that's why
you tried to leave
before you were healed
maybe
that's
why you eventually
left
before you healed ME

your shadow fell over me
as i fell for you

my mind is a muddle

do you even know how
amazing
you
are?

do you know how
much
i
envy you?
your freedom?

you can fly
on your own two wings
i am here
clinging
to the freedom
i tasted
when you were beside me

you don't know
that i
love you

you don't know yet
but you will

i gaze at you in quiet rapture
you've returned
but why?
why come back to this shack of a home?
this doll of a boy?
this shell of a heart?

why

oh

oh...

you've known?

no?

then you
you felt the same
we both felt the same without
ever
knowing
and suddenly...
this home is a home and a glorious shining home
this doll is a boy and a loved, blessed boy
this heart
beats
again

for you

i love you

and you know

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um yeah i can't write don't judge me
i don't even know if this counts

drabble from Antietam to Owl
if i can i'll enter it in ~riquira-shina's contest

idk

i own antie
she owns owl

and now i gtg watch iron man

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:iconoraclebacon:
Very nice! It seems to really encompass those feelings... At least as much as I know about them. :P
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:iconshadow7-7:
*shadow7-7 Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow...
I like this.
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:iconshadow7-7:
*shadow7-7 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist
No problem~
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:icongeneralpanic:
~GeneralPanic Nov 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
asdf GURL I'm SOOOOO tempted to write music for this and sing it :3

This is fabulous amg <3
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:iconenchantedtopaz:
OHMYGOSH
that would be epic a;skdjflkasjd
<3

thank you so much ilu <3
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:icongeneralpanic:
~GeneralPanic Dec 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
If I wasn't so busy all the time I would so do it... Maybe during the summer hmmm :3

You're so welcome! ilumoar <33
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:iconriquira-shina:
Awww~~~ I love this! And this definitely works~ I'll add it~ Gaaah so sweet~
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:iconenchantedtopaz:
i'll do more
i'm so sorry
that this is all
i've done
sososo
sorry
/flees/
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:iconriquira-shina:
don't be sorry! sweetie, I love this~ It's so sweet and I love seeing into Antie's mind~
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